Second Rough Cut

After evaluating the first rough cut and receiving feedback from our focus group, we re-filmed the dark room scene and edited some of the errors with continuity for the Pecc Street scene, including cutting and cropping the car out of one of the shots with the anti-hero looking at the body.

Before:


After cutting shorter and cropping the top of the shot:


Here is the second rough cut of our OTS with the revised changes:



For the next edit, we will be adding the names of the cast, director, producer, film title, as well as all non-diegetic sound including foleying, music, dialogue and the monologue. We will also refine some of the editing including speeds, contrast, cutting, and transitions. We aim record, edit and add all of the non-diegetic sound to our OTS by next week. We will add text to the OTS after this.