Continuity Task Feedback

After presenting the unfinished first edit of our continuity task to our focus group, we recorded their feedback using handouts and by filming their comments.

Handouts which Morrighan photographed:


Presentation and comments from focus group:


In conclusion, the general response from our focus group was that the beginning clip was prolonged and should be cut shorter. We should experiment with using more transitions for our next edit, as we were lacking in this area, and for next time, we should use more than one camera for a wider variety of shots and a better understanding of the 180 degree rule. The main issue identified was with the mise en scene shoes, as the rest of the costumes were suitable for film noir characters, apart from the modern converse trainers worn by the femme fatale and redemptive woman characters. We will attempt to edit these out of our final edit.